Lyric Writing: 6 Ways To Make Your Opening Lines Sparkle!

Graham English
2 min readMay 18, 2022

Not sure how to start your song? Try this:

Curiosity

These opening lyrics pique your interest without giving away too much information, so you want to keep listening:

  • I heard there was a secret chord
  • There must be some kind of way out of here
  • I read the news today; oh boy

Open Loops

An open loop is a thought that doesn’t get completed, leaving you wanting to close the loop:

  • Please allow me to introduce myself
  • Dig, if you will, the picture
  • A man walks down the street

Places, Weather, and Environments

A fast way to make an impression is to describe the details of the environment in your lyric:

  • It was raining hard in ‘Frisco
  • On a dark desert highway
  • Mind if I sit down?

Unique and Unusual

These lyrics draw your attention toward objects and ideas that stand out:

  • Jeremiah was a bullfrog
  • Hello darkness, my old friend
  • Turn off your mind, relax and float downstream

Active

Lyrics that have action are more engaging than passive opening lines:

  • The screen door slams
  • Stop…in the name of love
  • Take the ribbon from your hair

Universal Suffering

We all know suffering and these opening lyrics acknowledge your pain:

  • When you try your best but you don’t succeed
  • When I find myself in times of trouble
  • Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far away
  • And now, the end is near
  • We’re caught in a trap

One of the most important things you can do for your songwriting is to keep practicing. The more you do it, the better you will become.

Keep at it!

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Graham English

Musician & Composer, Best-Selling Author of Logic Pro For Dummies